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 One of the hardest parts of learning how to use Manim is to deviate from the quickstart and basic examples given in the documentation,
-and learning to carve your own path. The goal of this guide is to give an example of how you might achieve that as a first-timer.
+and coding your own animation. By the end of this, you should have had some experience learning how to go about with this!
 
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 Part One: The Basics
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-Here we talk about the basics: what are Mobjects, Animations, Groups, Updaters, and many more tips and tricks. It gives many examples and intends to
-teach by example. It encourages you to test your understanding by recreating certain sequences of animations.
+Here we talk about the basics: what are Mobjects, Animations, Groups, Updaters, and many other basic aspects of Manim. It gives many examples
+about each concept, and encourages you to test your understanding by recreating certain sequences of animations.
 Feel free to return to this section anytime you need a refresher on something during part two.
 
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 Part Two: The Project
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-Here is the fun part. We go through and make our own creation from start to finish, explaining how to search the documentation, come up with coding logic
-to make your ideas come alive and much more. By the end of this section, you should be fully prepared to tackle your own project.
-
 .. note:: As of right now, this section is still under construction.
 
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+Here is the fun part: We go through and make our own creation from start to finish, explaining how to effectively search the documentation,
+and come up with the logic to make your ideas come to life. By the end of this section, you should be fully prepared to tackle your own project.
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